Delmy Del Cid Journal # 10
Classy Trashy
1. Fancy Jewelry 1. Ripped Clothes
2. Unique clothing 2. No form in going to school
3. Huge cars 3. Smells bad
4. Dinner at fancy places 4. Always dirty
5. Big house outside New York 5. Is bullied by everyone
Miguel grew up as a wealthy child living in New York City. He was the richest kid in his high school. Big cars, fancy restaurants and always on top of every clothing line he can get, this was his life style. He only knew the good ways of life. He became the perfect role model for guys at his school, smart, well dress and handsome.
" Richardo is so ugly looking since what happen to him". Richardo grew up in a middle class family but he lost everything in a fire. “He’s always smelling bad and his clothes are ripped" " Richardo does belong in the streets, he's worthless and nasty looking.” Richardo is always bullied by everyone because he doesn’t have any money and he is poor.
8/10: You are definitely beginning to establish the difficult techniques from this past chapter: Authorial Interpretation and Interpretation by Another Character. I would like for you to hold yourself to account for the grammatical errors that exist within these passages…you don’t want the reader to be distracted by them.
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