Bell rings at 3:15pm, john is waiting for Mathew outside his locker. Mathew had been thinking
about confess something to John, but doesn’t know how to.
“How was class” John asked
“Boring as usual” Mathew grew up thinking about this for almost 10 years without telling
anyone.
“Is something wrong?” Mathew thinks about this and tells himself “Should I tell him, he is my
best friends.” His mind is confused.
“Let’s walk to McDonalds” Growing up with this situation was hard to deal with and his parents
were upset and didn’t understand why this happened to him.
“John we grew up together and I can’t hide this from you”
“What are you talking about?”
“How’s your girlfriend?”
“She’s great; she’s the world to me, why?”
“Oh that’s great and just wondering… how do you feel about the situation on the TV last night?”
“Which situation?”
“The one about being different, and making it legal for different people.”
“Oh yeah, I think it’s a good way for all people to be equal no matter what.”
Mathew was excited his friend thought this.
“That’s good; I mean it’s a great way for people to be equal no matter what.”
“Why they question though?”
“I wanted to know what you thought about that.”
“Well I think its awesome.”
While the best friends finished ordering food, John had that thought why Mathew had asked him.
9/10: Be careful of slight grammatical errors.
ReplyDeleteThere were some missing commas, or punctuation in the wrong place.
Good subtext.