Final reflection

I found that being part of Hunter College early college program helped me have a better prepared future in my college career because I had an idea of college will be about and how the rest of my school life will be. Also I felt better prepared because at first I thought college will be in a different way but it wasn’t its more complicated and more dedicated and without the hard work and effort it will be hard at the long run. Also it’s better prepared for me to be more organized and well prepared with my assignments and projects.

My main obstacles that I faced were staying on track with my grades and my assignments. Also being able to turn in my homework on time and being able to finish it throughout the weekend. I over came these obstacles by doing my homework on Fridays and being able to turn them in on time. I was more organized with my homework.

One moment of great success that I experienced this year was my final English presentation. It was Riyesh and I working on a huge project that counted for at all and we finished it on time and we were able to have fun with it and it all turned out to be a great project. I believe were successful because we didn’t give up and when we had difficulties, we settled them in a peaceful matter.

Some lessons that I learned this year from Fiction Writing class that I will be able to use in my writing are the different fiction techniques, such as foreshadow, manipulating time, slow motion and a lot more. I will be able to use these techniques because I learned to use them throughout the year and was able to accomplish these techniques. What I learned about myself as a writer this year is that I can be a really passionate, romantic writer and I am very detailed. Also I have a worst grammar and I am starting to fix it.

I couldn’t take a course at Hunter College but I was able to take my regular classes, English, History and Math.

I think I need to work on being more organized and more aware of what things are due and when and being able to turn them on time. Also I feel that I can be more dedicated and harder working. I will be more dedicated in my work and make sure it’s the best work I’ve ever done and I will make sure it’s one of my best work.

I used the library mostly because it was a quiet and you can focus when you need work done. Also I used the computer labs and the gym. I was mostly everywhere this year at Hunter and I was able to use what was available for me.

What I learned about myself that I was able to be part of this earl college program is that nothing is impossible and everything takes dedication and hard work to get where you want to get to. Also I am more active with programs and I put effort in things.

I don’t really know where I will be going to school in the Fall because of all the options I have but I think I will go for the best school that offers more money and more education.

My personal goals for the future are becoming an educated, dedicated woman with a great degree and make my family and everyone that believed in me happy and to make myself feel important and make a great women that I was always raised to be. I see myself still in school getting my masters 5 years from now. In 10 years probably creating a family being able to have a house and being able to have a great future and having a great job. In 20 year I see myself with a family, building a strong relationship and helping my parents out.

The advice I would give future MHSHS students in order to help them prepare for this experience will be to learn from everything, pay attention to what life brings you and take advantage of this experience to create the rest of their life. Also using this experience to take the right path into college and future learning’s.

will you forgive? final draft

Will you forgive me?

“ I am sorry for everything I’ve done to you, I love you Karen.” Those were his last words he said to me. Andrew was young when he passed away. He spent a day at the hospital with treatments that never worked but made it worse for his survival. It was the winter of 2004 when I’ve meet Andrew in our Biology 105 class. We both went to college together. We had a project together, so we spent majority of the time together. We got to know each other and he became my best friend. Two week passed and we went out almost every weekend. The project was to design a DNA model from daily things we used. We had so many things that we used that we designed two models. Andrew told me that night he was catching feelings for me and I confessed“ So am I.”

We decided to wait before anything serious. Days we spent together went by quickly and every moment we spend together we made it last. Andrew grew up in New York City and I grew up in New Brunswick, New Jersey. Rutgers was our college, our moment in life where we meet . Andrew was always looking at everything from the positive side, he wasn’t negative. Everything he did was beautiful and creative. His imagination was like a 5 year old but a mind of a 20 year, which was his age. I had trouble in my English class so Andrew helped me through my difficulties and eventually I passed the semester. Finals week was around the corner. Everyone was stressed but not Andrew, he was calm and was always positive. Andrew only had 3 finals and by the end of Wednesday he was done. I was studying for finals that I had the whole week. Andrew stayed up with me every night studying and making sure I understand everything and every question was answered. I was ready for these finals and I was confident. At the end of the week, Friday night a couple of friends, Andrew and I decided to get out of stress from the finals. We decided to head to the club. All night Andrew and I danced. Sweat dripped down our bodies. It was crowded, so everyone was on top of each other. Songs were played and ever song was enough to dance together. The club was very hot and bodies on top of bodies made it worse. We stopped dancing for a bit for a drink.

“ I love dancing with you,” Andrew said.
“ So do I. OMG This is my song! Lets go dance.”I said to Andrew.

He grabbed my waist, my hands around his neck. He turned me around. We were grinding on each other. His chest was sweating, he told me he loved me. I spinned , kissed him. His lips were soft , hot and pink. He asked

“ Do you want to be mine?”
“YES,” I answered with excitement.

December 20, 2004 was the night that everything turned true and real. Andrew ans I were together and we were both strong and we had our hopes high to keep a strong relationship. Christmas was next week and we both had plans to go back home. December 23, 2004,Andrew headed to New York while I stayed in New Brunswick. I was staying for 2 weeks to spend New Year’s with my family. Before I left, I gave Andrew his Christmas present. I told him:

“ Don’t open it yet, Wait ‘til christmas day,” I said.

He gave me my present as well. Christmas day was here and I missed Andrew a lot and I needed to see him. This was the first time I was apart from him. I was happy to be with my family but I wanted to be with Andrew too.

“Merry Christmas babe” he texted. “I miss you dearly, enjoy your day with your family. Text me when you can. I <3 YOU :)”
“ Merry Christmas to you too, I miss you so much as well, I love you too :)!” I texted back.

That night I had a great time with everyone. Ar 2am I got a text from an unknown number. It was a picture of a guy kissing a girl. Andrew was kissing another girl. Andrew cheated on me. I saw this picture and it destroyed me completely. I felt like i had nothing left, I felt worthless. I couldn’t get it through my head that he did that. What did I do wrong was my everyday question. Did i deserve this? I spend the rest of the days crushed and Andrew texted and called but I didn’t answer. I got back to campus and Andrew was waiting for me infront of my door.

“Hi babe,” he said.

I looked at him and just looked away. I opened my door.
“Why haven’t you texted or called me back, what’s wrong?” He asked.
“You’re a cheater, I don’t want to see you.”
“What are you talking about, Karen?”
“The picture of you kissing some bitch on Dec. 25th at 2am. I got a text”
“What are you talking about?”
“THIS PICTURE!”

I showed him the picture. I was so angry, tears started to drip from my eyes.

“Babe, I was drunk.”
“WTF?,Why would you do that?”
“I am sorry, babe. I don’t remember what I was doing.”
“ Get away from me, get out.”
“Babe, I am sorry. I love you.”

My heart knew I had to forgive him. He hugged me and all I did was cry, cry tears of pain.

“ Don’t fucking do that again babe.”
“I am sorry, babe.”

He kissed me and I knew I had to forgive his apology. I lost trust in Andrew, and he knew he had to gain it back again. Days came and days went. Our relationship wasn’t as strong as before. Andrew and I started to become apart from each other. One night he called me over to his room, I decided to go. He’d opened the door and all I saw was a table with a candle light and his room smelled like flowers. The sweet, soft voice of his when he said:

“Come in babe, I hope you like this, this is all for you.”

Andrew prepared a lovely dinner. Steak, well cooked, rice white rice accompanied with a salad and water.

“ I am sorry Karen, I never meant to hurt you and I feel guilty for what I did, I am very sorry, forgive me?”

I had to think twice for this. Seconds went slow and I decided.

I didn’t know whether to forgive him or not. I knew I didn’t deserve this and if I did, I would seem weak. I know I am not weak.

“Andrew, forgiving you isn’t easy. What would you do if I would do that to you?”
“ I wouldn’t forgive at all.”
“ There’s your answer Andrew.
“ But yet I would understand your reason for doing this.”
“ And like I said I understand but I can’t forgive you.”

I questioned my decision, but I couldn’t turn back. I left his room and all I wanted is to be alone. Months passed and I’ve walked passed , ignored him everything to not be in contact with Andrew. I felt wrong for doing this but he had to know that it’s hard being cheated on. Living with the thought that the one person you have learned to love, was the one that destroy you and destroy what we created. I didn't want to go back to my relationship before. Things were perfect and peaceful. Beautiful and as time went by, the relationship blossomed but as time also passed by jealousy, envy and greed grew in between us. His name was Mike. I learned to love him and accept him for who he was but everything changed real soon. Every thought that went through my head when I was with Mike, were the same thoughts I thought with Andrew. “ What did I do wrong?” “Why I am in this situation?” “ I don’t deserve this” and other more. The only difference in this relationship than my previous was that I love Andrew and I didn’t want to lose him at all. He became my reason for everything.

I headed to his room. My heart pumped so fast and I felt the adrenaline racing. My breathe became heavy and slow. I noticed that as I walked past his room, the door was open and the lights were off. I went inside.

“ Andrew..... are you here?”

I turned the light on and I saw Andrew laying down on the floor, surrounded by blood. I yelled with fear and terror.I grabbed him by his arms and carried him to my car. I took him straight to the hospital. It was 2am on a tuesday of March 2006. The night seemed endless and I didn’t know what to do. We arrived at the hospital and Andrew was treated in the emergency room. That night was the beginning, the beginning to an end. Hours passed before I saw Andrew. His parents had arrived at the hospital. Doctor Mackley, Andrew’s specialist wanted to speak with his parents. They talked and all I saw was Andrew’s mom, Kimberly crying, crying intensely. They came over and Andrew’s dad, Mathew said to me:

“Karen, I don’t know how to tell you this, ummmm......”

He took a long pause. My heart was racing and pumping extremely fast. I felt my lungs cramping up.
“Andrew has cancer and its spread all over his lungs.”

I didn’t know what to do. I squatted down and cried. Tears and pain inside was all I felt. This couldn’t be happening. The doctor had said Andrew wanted to see me. I headed to his room and in a couple of seconds I was on the side of his bed. His face was pale, his lips red as a rose, his hair, as usual.

“Karen”

His voice called me with pain that broke me into tears.

“ I am here,Andrew.Shhhh babe.”

I couldn’t let him see me like this. I tried to hold my tears inside.

“I have to tell you something, I am sorry for what I did, you’re my everything and as I lay here all I want is for you to forgive me and never let me go”
“ I forgive you babe and I will never let you go,” I replied.

Tears and tears came down like waterfalls and that’s all I felt. He grabbed my hand kissed it and pulled me to him.

“I love you, baby.”
“I love you too.”

And with his last kiss he said goodbye. He died in front in me and I yelled with terror, calling him to come back. I knew life wasn’t going to give him another chance. I knew this was my fault. The doctor had said that Andrew knew he was diagnosed with cancer a couple of months ago. This was my fault. Something so small affected us for months and in one night he was gone, taken away from me. I would never forgive myself for this. Maybe one day, I will see him and as I told him “I will never let go” became my motivation for life since his death.

Dradt 2

    “ I am sorry for everything I’ve done to you, I love you Karen.” Those were his last words he said to me. Andrew was young when he passed away. He spent a day at the hospital with treatments that never worked but made it worse for his survival. It was the winter of 2004 when I’ve meet Andrew in our Biology 105 class. We both went to college together. We had a project together, so we spent majority of the time together. We got to know each other and he became my best friend. Two week passed and we went out almost every weekend. The project was to design a DNA model from daily things we used. We had so many things that we used that we designed two models. Andrew told me that night he was catching feelings for me and I confessed:

“ So am I.”

we decided to wait before anything serious. Days we spent together went by quickly and every moment we spend together we made it last. Andrew grew up in New York City and I grew up in New Brunswick, New Jersey. Rutgers was our college, our moment in life were we meet . Andrew was always looking at everything from the positive side, he wasn’t negative. Everything he did was beautiful and creative. His imagination was like a 5 year old but a mind of a 20 year, which was his age. I had trouble in my English class so Andrew helped me through my difficulties and eventually I passed the semester. Finals week was around the corner. Everyone was stressed but not Andrew, he was calm and was always positive. Andrew only had 3 finals and by the end of wednesday he was done. I was studying for finals that I had the whole week. Andrew stayed up with me every night studying and making sure I understand everything and every question was answered. I was ready for these finals and I was confident. At the end of the week, Friday night a couple of friends, Andrew and I decided to get out of stress from the finals. We decided to head to the club. All night Andrew and I danced. Sweat dripped down our bodies. It was crowded, so everyone was on top of each other. Songs were played and ever song was enough to dance together. The club was very hot and bodies on top of bodies made it worse. We stopped dancing for a bit for a drink.

“ I love dancing with you.” Andrew said.
“ So do I. OMG this is my song lets go dance”. I said to Andrew.

    He grabbed my waist, my hands around his neck. He turned me around. We were grinding on each other. His chest was sweating, he told me he loved me. I spinned , kissed him. His lips were soft , hot and pink. He asked:

“ Do you want to be mine?”
“YES” I answered with excitement.

    December 20, 2004 was the night that everything turned true and real. Andrew ans I were together and we were both strong and we had our hopes high to keep a strong relationship. Christmas was next week and we both had plans to go back home. December 23, 2004, I headed to New York while Andrew stayed in New Brunswick.  I was staying for 2 weeks to spend New  Year’s with my family. Before I left, I gave Andrew his christmas present. I told him:

“ Don’t open it yet, wait ‘til christmas day”.

He gave me my present as well. Christmas day was here and I missed Andrew a lot and I needed to see him. This was the first time I was apart from him. I was happy to be with my family but I wanted to be with Andrew too. Christmas morning he texted :

“Merry Christmas babe, I miss you dearly, enjoy your day with your family. Text me when you can. I <3 YOU :)”
“ Merry Christmas to you too, I miss you so much as well, I love you too :)!” I texted back.

That night I had a great time with everyone. Ar 2am I got a text from an unknown number. It was a picture. A guy kissing a girl, Andrew was kissing another girl. Andrew cheated on me. I saw this picture and it destroyed me completely. I spend the rest of the days crushed and Andrew texted and called but I didn’t answer. I got back to campus and Andrew was waiting for me infront of my door.

“Hi babe” he said.

I looked at him and just looked away. I opened my door, he asked:

“Why haven’t you texted or called me back, what’s wrong?”
“You’re a cheater, I don’t want to see you.”
“What are you talking about Karen?”
“The picture of you kissing some bitch on Dec. 25th at 2am. I got a text”
“What are you talking about?”
“THIS PICTURE!”

I showed him the picture. I was so angry, tears started to drip from my eyes.

“Babe, I was drunk”
“WTF , why would you do that?”
“I am sorry babe, I don’t remember what I was doing.”
“ Get away from me, get out.”
“Babe I am sorry, I love you.”

When he said “ I love you” my heart knew I had to forgive him. He hugged me and all I did was cry, cry tears of pain.

“ Don’t fucking do that again babe.”
“I am sorry babe.”

He kissed me and I knew I had to forgive his apology. I lost trust in Andrew, and he knew he had to gain it back again. Days cam and days went. Our relationship wasn’t strong as before. Andrew and I started to become apart from each other. One night he called me over to his room, I decided to go. He’d opened the door and all I saw was a table with a candle light and his room smelled like flowers. The sweet, soft voice of his his when he said:

“Come in babe, I hope you like this, this is all for you.”

Andrew prepared a lovely dinner. Steak, well cooked, rice white rice accompanied with a salad and water.

“ I am sorry Karen, I never meant to hurt you and I feel guilty for what I did, I am very sorry, forgive me?”

I had to think twice for this. Seconds went slow and I decided.

“I forgive you Andrew.”

He jumped with excitement , hugged me really tight that I smelled his shower gel.

“I love you Karen.”
“And I love you too Andrew”.

We watched a movie but all of a sudden Andrew started to bleed from his nose. IIt became unstoppable. I took him straight to the hospital. It was 2am on a tuesday in March. The night seemed endless and I didn’t know what to do. We arrived at the hospital and Andrew was treated in the emergency room. That night was the beginning, the beginning to an end. Hours passed before I saw Andrew. His parents had arrived at the hospital. Doctor Mackley, Andrew’s specialist wanted to speak with his parents. They talked and all I saw was Andrew’s mom, Kimberly crying, crying intensely. They came over and Andrew’s dad, Mathew said to me:

“Karen, I don’t know how to tell you this, ummmm......”

He took a long pause. My heart was racing and pumping extremely fast. I felt my lungs cramping up.
“Andrew has cancer and its spread all over his lungs.”

I didn’t know what to do. I squatted down and cried. Tears and pain inside was all I felt. This couldn’t be happening. The doctor had said Andrew wanted to see me. I headed to his room and in a couple of seconds I was on the side of his bed. His face was pale, his lips red as a rose, his hair, as usual.

“Karen”

His voice called me with pain that broke me into tears.

“ I am here Andrew, shhhh babe.”

I couldn’t let him see me like this. I tried to hold my tears inside.

“I have to tell you something, I am sorry for what I did, you’re my everything and as I lay here all I want is for you to forgive me and never let me go”
“ I forgive you babe and I will never let you go” I replied.

Tears and tears came down like waterfalls and that’s all I felt. He grabbed my hand kissed it and pull me to him.

“I love you baby.”
“I love you too.”
And with his last kiss he said goodbye. He died in front in me and I yelled with terror, calling him to come back. I knew life wasn’t going to give him another chance. I knew this was my fault. The doctor had said that Andrew knew he was diagnosed with cancer a couple of months ago. This was my fault, I took something so small affect us for months and in one night he was gone, taken away from me. I would never forgive myself for this. Maybe one day, I will see him and as I told him “I will never let go” became my motivation for life since his death.

Reflection:
Based on my notes, I don't plan on changing anything because I like it the way it was edited by my peers.  My protagonist does have and internal desire which is to be loved by her partner and not get treated the way she was treated previous. She doesn't have and external desire. The message I would like to communciate to the reader would be that being cheated is one of the worst thing that could be done in a relationship and that sometimes because of this you are left with a burden or even more hurt than you can ever be. My hopes on my fiction piece are to have a high standing piece and to be able to communciate what I want to be said to the readers. I chose to write about this because from personal experience and also because I have seen other people go through the same thing. What intrigues me about my story is that I can put everything I want that goes through my head down. Also because I feel like I am expressing my feels as Karen.

Draft 1

    “ I am sorry for everything I’ve done to you, I love you Karen.” Those were his last words he said to me. Andrew was young when he passed away. He spent a day at the hospital with treatments that never worked but made it worse for his survival. It was the winter of 2004 when I’ve meet Andrew in our Biology 105 class. We both went to college together. We had a project together, so we spent majority of the time together. We got to know each other and he became my best friend. Two week passed and we went out almost every weekend. The project was to design a DNA model from daily things we used. We had so many things that we used that we designed two models. Andrew told me that night he was catching feelings for me and I confessed:

“ So am I.”

we decided to wait before anything serious. Days we spent together went by quickly and every moment we spend together we made it last. Andrew grew up in New York City and I grew up in New Brunswick, New Jersey. Rutgers was our college, our moment in life were we meet . Andrew was always looking at everything from the positive side, he wasn’t negative. Everything he did was beautiful and creative. His imagination was like a 5 year old but a mind of a 20 year, which was his age. I had trouble in my English class so Andrew helped me through my difficulties and eventually I passed the semester. Finals week was around the corner. Everyone was stressed but not Andrew, he was calm and was always positive. Andrew only had 3 finals and by the end of wednesday he was done. I was studying for finals that I had the whole week. Andrew stayed up with me every night studying and making sure I understand everything and every question was answered. I was ready for these finals and I was confident. At the end of the week, Friday night a couple of friends, Andrew and I decided to get out of stress from the finals. We decided to head to the club. All night Andrew and I danced. Sweat dripped down our bodies. It was crowded, so everyone was on top of each other. Songs were played and ever song was enough to dance together. The club was very hot and bodies on top of bodies made it worse. We stopped dancing for a bit for a drink.

“ I love dancing with you.” Andrew said.
“ So do I. OMG this is my song lets go dance”. I said to Andrew.

    He grabbed my waist, my hands around his neck. He turned me around. We were grinding on each other. His chest was sweating, he told me he loved me. I spinned , kissed him. His lips were soft , hot and pink. He asked:

“ Do you want to be mine?”
“YES” I answered with excitement.

    December 20, 2004 was the night that everything turned true and real. Andrew ans I were together and we were both strong and we had our hopes high to keep a strong relationship. Christmas was next week and we both had plans to go back home. December 23, 2004, I headed to New York while Andrew stayed in New Brunswick.  I was staying for 2 weeks to spend New  Year’s with my family. Before I left, I gave Andrew his christmas present. I told him:

“ Don’t open it yet, wait ‘til christmas day”.

He gave me my present as well. Christmas day was here and I missed Andrew a lot and I needed to see him. This was the first time I was apart from him. I was happy to be with my family but I wanted to be with Andrew too. Christmas morning he texted :

“Merry Christmas babe, I miss you dearly, enjoy your day with your family. Text me when you can. I <3 YOU :)”
“ Merry Christmas to you too, I miss you so much as well, I love you too :)!” I texted back.

That night I had a great time with everyone. Ar 2am I got a text from an unknown number. It was a picture. A guy kissing a girl, Andrew was kissing another girl. Andrew cheated on me. I saw this picture and it destroyed me completely. I spend the rest of the days crushed and Andrew texted and called but I didn’t answer. I got back to campus and Andrew was waiting for me infront of my door.

“Hi babe” he said.

I looked at him and just looked away. I opened my door, he asked:

“Why haven’t you texted or called me back, what’s wrong?”
“You’re a cheater, I don’t want to see you.”
“What are you talking about Karen?”
“The picture of you kissing some bitch on Dec. 25th at 2am. I got a text”
“What are you talking about?”
“THIS PICTURE!”

I showed him the picture. I was so angry, tears started to drip from my eyes.

“Babe, I was drunk”
“WTF , why would you do that?”
“I am sorry babe, I don’t remember what I was doing.”
“ Get away from me, get out.”
“Babe I am sorry, I love you.”

When he said “ I love you” my heart knew I had to forgive him. He hugged me and all I did was cry, cry tears of pain.

“ Don’t fucking do that again babe.”
“I am sorry babe.”

He kissed me and I knew I had to forgive his apology. I lost trust in Andrew, and he knew he had to gain it back again. Days cam and days went. Our relationship wasn’t strong as before. Andrew and I started to become apart from each other.

Reflection:

Based on my notes, I do plan to complete my story and also I plan to change it. By changing my story, I would be more specific with my work and be detailed with my writing. My protagonist does have and internal desire which is to be loved by her partner and not get treated the way she was treated previous. She doesn't have and external desire. The message I would like to communciate to the reader would be that being cheated is one of the worst thing that could be done in a relationship and that sometimes because of this you are left with a burden or even more hurt than you can ever be. My hopes on my fiction piece are to have a high standing piece and to be able to communciate what I want to be said to the readers. I chose to write about this because from personal experience and also because I have seen other people go through the same thing. What intrigues me about my story is that I can put everything I want that goes through my head down. Also because I feel like I am expressing my feels as Karen.

Journal 7

Journal # 7
    “ I love you” are the three most important words that I will ever tell you. Powerful love and passion grows in my veins. Blood rushes through my body when it feels your touch. Days grow old without you and time moves slow when you are away. I walk through the night like a lonely wolf looking for her mate. The moon is as bright on the midnight sky, walking in the cold thinking about you. I miss you like a flower misses rain on a drought.
    I need you like a rose needs the thorns on its stem to be beautiful. Without you in my life, I would be incomplete. You became my shadow when I was only a shade. My heart skips a beat when I see you. I grow in love with you with every moment, every touch that I get from you. You became a major figure in my life that I would hate to be missing. I don’t ever want to lose you. Your Valuable as a gem that a lot of people who die and want to have in their possession, but you are mine.

The one who waits

The protagonist of this story would be the men that landed on Mars. Their desire is to look around Mars, but at the end two of them end up dead while the rest want to go back to Earth. Some traits that characterize the protagonist are that they describe how they are coming in a rocket and they are scientists running test on the well they’ve notice. The antagonist would be the martian’s entity in the well. The martian’s entity is trying to stop the men from leaving because it’s been a while, ten thousands year since life had been in Mars. The theme of this story is the embarrassment of human existence in the universe. The techniques that are used to develop the message within the story would be the fact that the men are being controlled by a martian in the well that gets into their minds and ends up killing them. The crisis action would be when Jones is dead and the rest decide to leave but then the captain shoots himself in the head. The protagonists don’t achieve what they want because they all end up dead. What I enjoyed about this story is the fact that it’s in a whole different world and the fact that they land in a place where life is gone and they are being mind controlled by a martian in a well.

Journal 6

Jasmin was a loving girlfriend to Edwin. They shared every moment with each other. People thought they were the perfect couple in Paris, France. After a year later, rumors started going around saying that Edwin was cheating on Jasmin with her cousin. Those rumors reached to Jasmin's eats and she started to notice something. Edwin was different with her and one day he confessed he was cheating. Jasmin felt heart broken but she just left without sayung a word and stood with Edwin even through his unfaithfulness.