Saturday, February 18, 2012

Forbidden Love

Mickey D grew up in Utah only knowing the family business, Cold stone Ice Cream Company. He knew that learning the family business was the most important thing that will keep his family known throughout Ice Cream century. Mickey was a bright kid with a lot of dreams ahead, he had went to medical school but knew his parents didn’t want him to be a doctor. Mickey meet Elizabeth at Medical school, but it was forbidden love. Her parents didn’t want anything that would distract Elizabeth from her studies. They kept then apart and Elizabeth was sent to New Zetherland to finish her study. Mickey never knew anything about Elizabeth since that day, no communication , nothing. On a humid summer’s day along the beach the sunrise was a cherish moment as Elizabeth and Mickey laid on the sand entangled in each others arms, smiling blissful at each other through their tired eye from the love they had. The wind blew her hair into a messy set. “ This wind keeps messing my hair.” “You look beautiful no matter what.” Her eyes sparkled with excitement. “ Looking in your eyes, brings the night sky to joy.” She knew that he was the one. “ Where do you get all of these words?” “ I go along and make them up, they’re probably corny but I don’t care.” Her smile became bigger and bigger. Holding hands was a bond that connected to become one person. The bond between each other was strong. The night became endless when they were together. The world and time was on their side. Life became harder after that night, but it will always be, two people apart from each other.

1 comment:

  1. You write about romance really well.
    I love the flashback in this scene...it helps the reader connect to the love they feel for one another.
    That being said, please make sure to remove all grammatical errors from your writing!
    8.5/10

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