Chris always wanted to be successful, but committing to a job is tough for him. He currently works in the food industry, but hates conforming to a regular schedule. He comes from rich roots and is constantly battling the lifestyles of his youth. Currently, he is an embarrassment to his family.
My Interpretation:
Chris started his life at age 30, after the death of his father. His family owned the top company in the country. As a child, Chris was the single child of the household. He loved his mother deeply, Mrs. Deep. Curly Blond strands of hair were always falling of her head. Beautiful, expensive clothes. Tall as a tree. His mother was the world to him. When he turned 15, his mother passed away of Kidney failure. That day was the end of his word. Tears came down his face like waterfalls, wind was strong as rocks. He went to the beach. Crying. Heart pounding out of his chest. Waves came in heavily. The sand was his comfort. After that day, his life became a living hell. His father became very strict on him. “Chris, you will make this company the best like it has been for centuries.” Chris wasn’t ready for all this. He didn’t finish school, and soon his father ended kicking him out. He started to work as a cashier in the food industry. Few years passed and his father passed away. At his father’s will, he didn’t receive anything and he became the embarrassment of the family. His uncle received everything and he ended up being the outsider of the family Deep.
You have some really great emotional descriptions in here!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start!
Now, just focus in on one moment so that we can hear Chris talk.
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